Michael Ridding Chapter 4 (with Insights!)

*Audible edition, read by Chris Abell, can be found here

4

“What I’m about to say is ludicrously stupid,” Benedict began, “but I ask that you keep an open mind. If you have any questions, I can answer them after.”

Michael nodded for Benedict to continue.

The flood of information the man let loose was overwhelming, but Michael kept quiet until the end.

“About a year ago, I came into possession of an extensive communications and networking corporation. Known as DenCom to most of the public, its advanced technologies division currently supplies the United States with the majority of its newest tech. Flight systems, satellites, even a few aircraft are in the works.

“I got to know the old CEO about a year before taking over the company. He’d heard about me through… okay, I know how stupid this is gonna sound, but he heard about me through my… ‘exploits’ in cryptozoology. I was job-hunting in Florida when he asked me to visit Denver, my old hometown. I accepted his offer, and he paid for a first-class ticket.

“I was taken straight from the airport to a house close by the Rockies. There, I was led to the bed of an old man who told me his name was Herbert Morecraft. He’d heard about the hobbies I had in my youth—ghost-hunting, UFOs, all that kind of stuff. Nothing ever came of it, though, until I was out of high school and I camped out in the Sierra Nevadas to look for Sasquatch. As I’m sure you’ve already assumed, I was young and stupid, so I got lost pretty quickly.

“As far as I was concerned, the trip was a complete failure. I was lost out there for three months with nothing but my coat and survival guide. I panicked, went feral, turned into a mountain man eating berries and catching trout out of streams to survive. Eventually, some hikers found me and took me back to town.

“After I got out of the hospital, I decided I’d had enough excitement for one lifetime. I spent four years in Seattle getting a useless degree in business management, then spent another year looking for work, living out of my car and cheap hotels so I could stay mobile. Near the end of that year was when Morecraft interviewed me.

“He told me two things. One, his doctors told him he was dying and he had less than a year to live, and two, that he’d researched me and was hoping I could take over as the new CEO once he passed away. I was floored. He laughed, then offered me a deal.

“He offered to fund a full expedition for the Sasquatch with me as the team leader. We could spend the next six months going wherever we wanted and doing whatever we wanted, but if we could prove the creature’s existence, then I would have fulfilled my end of the bargain, and he would sign over DenCom to me. He also said that if I did become CEO, he wanted me to pick up where he left off on his own investigations after he was gone. What could I say to that? He was offering me a chance to pursue my—albeit strange—passion. Plus, he offered me a hefty paycheck whether I came back with proof or not, just for my time. So, I accepted his offer, and here I am.”

Michael took the story in. It was obviously rehearsed, but much of it sounded sincere. But what was the point?

He’d never been a believer in the paranormal, apart from the existence of ghosts. In his youth he saw things, most of them probably figments of his imagination. Nonetheless, the experiences had opened the door to research in the phenomena, and he came out a believer. But everything else that fell under the catch-all term of “paranormal” didn’t particularly interest him. Still, his curiosity was piqued.

“So you found one?” Michael asked cautiously.

“Well, I’m CEO, so I must have found something,” Benedict answered with a hint of sarcasm.

“All right, then what did you find? A live one? Footprints? Hair?”

“If I could tell you, I would, but one of the things Morecraft and I agreed on was that none of the discoveries I made using his resources could become public. I mean, couldn’t you just see hillbilly gangs heading up into the woods and killing every last one if they knew where to look?”

Michael opened his mouth to answer, but before he could, Benedict continued.

“Before he died, Morecraft said he wanted me to bring in more people to help me in my work. He didn’t name anyone in particular, but in my…” Benedict trailed off, gathering his thoughts. Several tense moments passed before he continued, “In my research, you and your friend Aron both showed up as potential candidates. Don’t ask why because honestly, I don’t quite know myself. I’m simply trusting the judgment of those who advise me.”

Michael raised an eyebrow.

“I want to offer you a deal, Michael. If you agree to help me with my research and expeditions, I will see to it that your store stays open. Not only that, but you will be paid generously to investigate and research a variety of subjects, from paranormal to political to religious. It’s all totally legal and sanctioned by the US government, as long as we do the occasional side work for them, in addition to giving them any valuable finds from our own investigations. I’m not allowed to answer the ‘why’ questions about your projects—or even say if your work is a success in some cases—but I can say you will make a good living and find fulfillment with the work you do. If at any time, that isn’t true, just let me know, and we will fix that. The arrangement would benefit everyone. I really, really think we can make this work.”

As Benedict caught his breath, Michael let the first of several questions out of his head. “You want me to take a second job working for you, and in exchange, you’ll pay me and support my shop?”

“Yep.” Benedict looked relieved, as if an enormous weight had been lifted from his shoulders.

“And I’ll have no idea what I’m working on until you tell me?”

“In some cases, yes. Think of it like you’re working alone on one corner of a puzzle. You may not know what it is—and I may not either—but when everyone puts their corners together, we get a picture. If you don’t feel like it’s a good fit…” he trailed off, his breathing still heavy. “If it’s not a good fit, then we can work something out. Plus, like I said, if your own interests are desirable and could provide useful results, I would be more than happy to let you pursue them with our help.”

Michael thought he would have more to ask, but as Benedict caught his breath, only one more question escaped his lips: “How do I know this isn’t a scam?”

Benedict reached into his coat pocket and produced a large packet that Michael was surprised could have been concealed without being noticed. He placed it on the table, taking one long look at it before sliding it across to Michael.

“Everything you’ll need to convince yourself is in there. I think it would be best if you took a day or two to look it over before making your choice. There’s a card with my personal phone number on it, so when the time comes to say yes or no, call me. Everything else should be self-explanatory.” Benedict got up and pushed his chair in. “I may not be reachable for the next twelve hours or so. Where I’m heading, I don’t get great reception. By tomorrow morning, though, I should be able to take calls.”

Benedict extended a hand to Michael, who hesitated for a moment before shaking. Part of him hoped that whatever was inside the packet was bogus and that the whole thing turned out to be a scam. He knew there could be dark things down that path, things he didn’t want to get involved in. And as he looked into Benedict’s eyes for the last time that day, he thought he could see what that kind of research could do to someone.

They ended the handshake, and Benedict headed for the door. “Think it over and give me a call. And for the moment, don’t tell anyone, not even Aron until I can talk to him personally.” He gave a small wave. “I’ll see you in time.”

Benedict left the break room, and shortly after, Michael heard the front door chime, signaling his departure.

Benedict had put on a good show, but he still could have been a brilliant con artist. It could all be a game, an elaborate plot meant to take everything Michael had left, which was already dwindling dangerously close to nothing by the day.

Money was so tight, he was considering talking to his parents again and seeing if he could move back home to Sacramento for a while. It was a prospect he loathed, mostly since it had been over a year since he had spoken with them. They hadn’t approved of his choice to leave Dallas, and the few times they had talked since the move had been tense, to say the least. When it came to his father, who never failed to bring it up, “hostile” would have been a better word. He knew he was a disappointment to them, forgoing relationships and stability in favor of his own desires.

Now, he might have an opportunity to do things right in their eyes, but he couldn’t say he wanted to.

He left the packet on the table and headed for the computer. First, he looked up DenCom and found it was an actual corporation. Not only that, but it was indeed the leader in non-commercial tech for businesses and the US government. He also found out that since the company’s founding in the sixties, no one had ever gotten an interview with either CEO, but he found purported pictures of them on conspiracy sites. Apparently, Morecraft and Benedict’s work had not gone unnoticed by those in tinfoil hats.

He found an article on one site detailing Morecraft’s disappearance and Benedict’s arrival onto the scene. The article included pictures of who they thought were the two CEOs. The older man in the first picture wore thick glasses and a slightly disheveled tan tweed sports jacket. Michael could tell the picture was likely taken without Morecraft’s knowledge, since he wasn’t looking at the camera and a blurry cityscape could be seen behind him. The other picture was obviously of Benedict, who also seemed oblivious to the photographer. His coat was blowing in the wind, and he looked to be on an airport tarmac with two other, much taller men: One was bald, the other sported a short Mohawk.

The article itself was essentially useless. It was a lot of “We know something is going on. We don’t know what, but something!”

He closed the computer, only slightly less cautious about the situation. Benedict was the subject of some crackpot’s mystery article. So what? Couldn’t that crackpot be Benedict himself, just another layer of the man’s scheme? He obviously knew Michael was going to look him up, so could he have written the article?

At least DenCom existed. That was verifiable. In fact, as he thought back to his last trip to Denver for a trade show, he had seen DenCom Tower in person. It was the largest building in the city, standing easily a third taller than the rest.

On top of that, it seemed well-established that the CEO had never been a public figure, and that he was only known by his first name, even within the company. Still, the article implied that the name might have been taken from the recently renamed street that led to DenCom Tower: Benedict Street.

He’d seen enough. He had to open the packet.

Michael headed back to the break room, the packet still lying on the table. He opened it, flipped it over, and let three items fall out. The first was a plain white business card with Benedict’s number written on it. The second was an employee manual that was easily an inch thick, labeled Practice and Procedure for DenCom Private Agents. Michael flipped through it, paying little attention to the text.

The third item was a small envelope labeled “Advance” in rushed handwriting. He gently opened it and nearly fell out of his chair.

Inside was a check made out to him for a million dollars.

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INSIGHTS!

Benedict’s backstory went through quite a few changes, but I never messed with the meat of the story. At one time, I drafted this as a narrative from Benedict’s point of view when he first took over DenCom. This was cut because I do plan to go back and tell this story in a future novel and also because a flashback on top of a flashback is not an ideal way to start a book (*cough*).

So we just had Benedict tell the story, and I think it works a little better and doesn’t raise the kind of questions the narrative likely would have.

That’s it for now. See you next week with another blog post!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I reading?

One Hundred Lyrics and a Poem by Neil Tennant

This is the first time in years that I think I’ve bought two copies of the same book. I actually bought one of the limited edition hardbacks that was signed, numbered, and in its own special case (this also marks the only time I can recall paying over $100 for a book for pleasure–it was a wedding present to myself).

I eventually got the standard edition as well because I’m so worried something will happen to the expensive one if I read it or carry it around with me.

In short, Neil takes 100 of his favorite lyrics from The Pet Shop Boys (he and Chris Lowe are the sole members of the band) and gives insight on each of the songs and their meaning or what inspired them. It’s been a fun read so far, and I hope to see more of Neil’s writing in the future.

Michael Ridding Chapter 3 (with Insights!)

*Audible edition, read by Chris Abell, can be found here

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Michael gazed down at his screen. The smaller man steadied himself on the aquarium shelves with his right hand. As he watched, the man’s face slowly returned to its normal color. It had been five minutes since the man had spoken out loud, and Michael was certain he was about to make his move. Whatever that was.

Michael had no weapon. Not because he had anything against them, but because he simply didn’t think he needed one. However, he suddenly wished he had a gun within reach as he saw the man approach the counter.

As he rounded the corner, Michael saw that he wore that same forced smile.

“Mr. Ridding,” the man began as he came up to the desk and extended a hand. “My name is Benedict, and if you don’t mind, I would like to take a moment of your time to talk about a business proposal.”

How did this strange man know his name? Was he some old contact, maybe a sales representative from one of the various companies he stocked? Maybe they had met at a trade show? It was possible, but then again, this was someone Michael knew he would have remembered.

Even so, he sounded as awkward as a young kid reading in front of a class. The presentation was obviously rehearsed, but there was genuine passion in the forced words. Whatever this guy wanted to talk over, he was serious, but also unsure of how to handle the situation. Michael considered the request. If it was a legitimate proposal, he was willing to hear it, but why present him with this now when the store was about to close?

Finally given a better chance to look the man over, Michael reconsidered his earlier assessment. It was obvious that Benedict wasn’t a drug addict or some other undesirable.

To start with, he smelled good. He wore a copious amount of Oxford Bleu cologne, the distinct scent crossing the distance between them with ease. His well-tailored coat was nicely set and freshly cleaned—not a hair clung to it.

It was like Michael was talking to a completely different man than the one who had walked in.

Michael grasped the outstretched hand while glancing at his wristwatch. It was just after twelve-thirty. “Well, I was about to close for lunch, so I guess we can talk in the break room, if you like.”

Benedict made little attempt to contain his joy.

Michael flipped the “Closed” sign, not bothering to lock the door, and showed Benedict to the small employee lunch area. The room consisted of a microwave atop a mini-fridge and a round folding table with two matching chairs. Michael let Benedict have a seat first, then walked to the refrigerator.

“You want anything? We have burritos, soup?”

“No thanks, I ate on the plane,” Benedict said, then quickly grew quiet, as if he’d been silently reprimanded.

“Well, I hope you don’t mind if I have something. It’ll be my first meal all day.” Or perhaps his only meal, but he didn’t tell Benedict that. If this man was here to discuss business, it wasn’t in his best interest to imply that he barely had enough money for one microwaved meal a day. “So, you just flew in?”

“Yeah, my plane came in just a couple hours ago. I had a layover and thought I would stop in town,” Benedict said as Michael put his food in the microwave.

“Well, feel free to let me know if I’m keeping you,” Michael said.

“Oh, they won’t leave without me,” Benedict said uncomfortably, as if he wasn’t sure if he should be saying anything at all.

“Wish airlines would do that for me,” Michael remarked. He hadn’t flown in a long time. Even then, it had been for business, and he found none of the sparse trips to trade shows enjoyable.

“Well, they have to, since it’s my plane,” Benedict said with a hint of resistance.

Michael looked back, his eyes bulging. “You have your own plane?”

“Well, I wouldn’t call it mine. It’s the company’s private jet, but I have priority,” Benedict replied.

Michael fought to keep his jaw from dropping. Benedict’s claim of having a private jet left him surprised, yet troubled. It seemed impossible that any company with the resources to maintain such an asset would be interested in his small shop.

The microwave went off and Michael retrieved his meal.

“All right,” he said, cautiously walking to the table and sitting across from Benedict. “You have my attention.”

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INSIGHTS!

Chapters 3 and 4 were originally combined, but during the early stages of the editing process, I ended up breaking them apart like I did many chapters of the novel. At one point, Michael Ridding only consisted of 20 or 25 chapters that were broken up for the sake of keeping a fast pace, which I still think works and made the initial writing process of DenCom 2 more enjoyable.

At one point, if I recall correctly, there was a scene where we see the killers (referenced in the first chapter) interact and adjust their plan, as well as hint at how it will eventually go wrong (I swear that’s not a spoiler. If their plan succeeded, we wouldn’t have nearly 57 more chapters of fun!). This was cut because the editor and I thought it would be a better idea to keep what was happening purely in Michael’s head for the duration of the flashback so it doesn’t confuse readers.

Anyway, that’s what I’ve got for now! See you next week with another blog post!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I listening to?

i by The Magnetic Fields

At the time of this writing, I’m listening to this album several times a week as I write my first Kaiju novel. Odds are, I’ll probably have moved on to DenCom 2 edits by the time this gets posted, so I can’t promise that I’m listening to it right now at this very moment. But I have a feeling it will filter into my DenCom 2 playlist, especially for the… well, let’s just say confusing moments that may or may not be written out.

Yeah… just… take anything I say about DenCom 2 right now with a grain of salt, K?

Anyway, I wanted to give them a shot but wasn’t ready to dive into 69 Love Songs or 50-Song Memoir, and this was the only other CD they had at the local record store at the time. I don’t know if this is regarded as one of their better albums or not, but I have to say I’m impressed. Stephin Merritt has a rather distinct voice that carries the often emotional lyrics with absolute precision. It’s well worth the listen if you have the chance.

Writing is Like a Magic 8 Ball

A couple months ago, my wife and I went to an 80’s/90’s-themed party for her work. After the party, everyone was allowed to take one of the little toys or trinkets from their table.

Among other things, we grabbed a magic 8 ball that now sits on my desk.

I’ve found it more than a little fun to play with for the last few weeks. As I’ve sauntered through line edits and redrafting short stories, I’ve asked it several times for advice.

“Magic 8 Ball, should I kill this character’s puppy?”

Signs point to Yes.

“Aw, but it’s a cute puppy. Are you sure?”

It is certain.

“Oh… ok.”

I can’t tell you why the Magic 8 Ball had a vendetta against the little boy’s puppy, but it did. In much the same way, I’m sure there is no shortage of writers out there who are facing the same problem. They don’t often know what to do, so they turn to the muse for help, hoping it’s up and running. Most of the time, it’s like a stubborn bear that will lash out when poked or prodded.

Or, worse, it’s like that shiny Yveltal I got a code for that won’t listen to me because I don’t have enough gym badges (If you got that reference, you’re cool, bro).

Anyway, you know what I mean, right?

It is decidedly so.

Good.

Sometimes the muse is an odd, inept little voice that tells you to kill the main character in Chapter 1 so the book can be over sooner. But more often than not, it’s a voice with some reason behind it. Recently, I was writing a novel, and my outline called for one of the main characters to win the fight.

He didn’t.

He died.

Painfully.

At the time, I was a wreck. I didn’t know why I’d let that happen. There were still five or six more chapters left in the book. I couldn’t let him die!

But this was a rare occasion where I listened to the muse, bypassed my thorough outline, and kept going. And not only do I feel like the decision worked, but it actually solved a few plotholes I’d caught earlier in the novel.

So, should you listen to the muse? Is it always a good idea?

Ask again later.

“Oh…”

“Should I listen to the muse?”

Concentrate and ask again.

“SHOULD I LISTEN TO THE MUSE! TELL ME, DAMN YOU!”

Reply hazy. Try again.

“YOU’RE A STUPID PIECE OF CRAP!”

My sources say no.

“Ok, I’m done arguing with a toy!”

Don’t count on it.

Anyway, that’s all I’ve got for now! See you next week with Michael Ridding, Chapter 3!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I reading?

Guilty by Association by Albert Simon

This is the sixth Henry Wright mystery and while the grammatical side occasionally leaves a lot to be desired, I’m quite enjoying this book.

I’d actually read up to Book 5, Coachella Valley Traffic Jam, thinking that was the end of the series. I’d read on the author’s Kindle page that he was working on a sixth book, but at that time it’d been many, many years since Book 5.

But much to my surprise, when adding Book 5 to my Goodreads “Read” list, I noticed the 6th book had a page. I clicked on it for giggles and was plesantly suprised to see a reviews and a buy link! So, apperently, the series isnt over!

Anyway, just a brief summary: Henry Wright is a retired police chief who lives in Palm Springs, California. He is often called in by his friend in the local police department to help him solve the tougher cases. Recently, (minor spoiler) he’s gotten engaged, and his wife helps him solve some cases.

This is definitely not what I usually read, but I came across the first book (which is FREE on Kindle) while I was writing Michael Ridding. I wanted to get my head in the Palm Springs mindset, and the series did not disapoint.

Anyway, I’ll link to the first book below (try to remember it’s a first novel, but in my opinion, storywise, it’s a pretty good one!) I know, I should probably post a link to the book I’m reading, but if you want to get into any series, you should probably start with Book 1.

You can take a look and possibly download it below (again, it’s FREE on Kindle!).

Wow, that’s the longest “What am I blah blah blah” thing I’ve written so far! I guess I love this series more than I thought!

Michael Ridding Chapter 2 (with Insights!)

*Audible edition, read by Chris Abell, can be found here

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Wednesday, June 17th
Seven Years Ago
Modern Aquaria
Palm Springs, California
12:16 PM

Life after college had been difficult for Michael.

Shortly after graduation, he moved to Dallas and worked for a tropical fish distribution center. After spending two years making a good living off of something he loved, things took a turn. He suffered something his parents had feared and predicted: A quarter-life crisis.

Desperate to make something more of his life, he saved enough to lease a condo in Palm Springs and started his own aquarium shop, Modern Aquaria. Initially, the shop did well, winning over most of the local aquarium enthusiasts and drawing new people into the hobby. Years later, though, hard times hit nationwide, and aquariums became a luxury few could afford. The shop did worse and worse over time, much to his disappointment. After months of struggling to keep the shop going, Michael was forced to announce that the store was closing.

That was when Benedict found him.

If Michael had a list of the oddest people he had ever met in his life, Benedict would have soared to the top on psychotic wings.

It was the final week of business and Michael was working alone, catering to no one when an unfamiliar face walked into the shop. He was a younger, slightly heavy man who was just shorter than Michael. He wore a long, black wool coat in the hundred-and-six-degree heat. Black denim pants and black dress shoes peeked out from underneath the coat, and Michael could make out a white T-shirt and a black, rectangular pendant around the man’s neck.

“Hey there,” Michael said, welcoming the man as he did all customers.

But the smaller man appeared intimidated, initially drawing back before returning the welcome with a nod and forced smile. He started browsing and was soon lost among the rows of aquariums and supplies.

Looking back, Michael could never place why, but he had felt that now more than ever would be a good time to check the security cameras. Using a system of his own design, he turned on the monitors, knowing that any obvious robbery would be caught on the DVR back in his office. The monitor, hidden under the cashier’s desk, took a moment to warm up before the multi-image screen displayed the four security camera feeds.

He saw the man in aisle four among the tanks of saltwater livestock, hunched over and…

Is he crying?

Michael saw the slow heaving of the man’s chest and the constant wiping of his eyes. He was obviously upset, and he was trying to hide it.

In the otherwise empty store, Michael could hear the man talking to himself, his voice barely audible over the buzzing and bubbling aquarium filters.

“You have to. You need to,” he was saying. “You came all this way, came this far. You can’t throw it away now that you know what he means.”

The man’s head shot up, searching to see if he had been heard, oblivious to the hidden security camera among the décor across from him.

Now, Michael could clearly make out the man’s face. His eyes were red and his cheeks were pink from wiping away tears. He looked down, making more of an effort to compose himself.

Michael tensed. The man could be some kind of nut-bag or drug addict—or worse. He had come across some before; Palm Springs was known for its diversity and acceptance of alternative lifestyles—most of which were accepted and even encouraged—but it was no longer the most “family-friendly” place, once one searched behind the blacked-out windows of supposedly abandoned buildings. Every once in a while, some “undesirables” would creep out from those dark buildings and into the light when least expected. They were far from welcome, even in the famously tolerant city.

Was this man one of them?

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INSIGHTS!

I still find Benedict to be an odd character. He’s more or less the culmination of several scrapped characters filling this role in early iterations of DenCom and unrelated works. Looking back on the earliest iteration of what I would call the “modern” DenCom crew, the first distinct version of Benedict was a side character who didn’t actually run the company but managed to take over by the end of that scrapped project.

Going back even further, I can find similar characters from what was meant to be the final Michael Ridding story. In this novelette, Michael took on many of Benedict’s personality traits; in many ways, this version of Michael was the perfect combination of Michael and Benedict. I do have plans to recycle this concept into current DenCom canon, but not anytime soon.

Many facets of the series predate Benedict’s arrival, including Modern Aquaria, Palm Springs, Michael, Aron, Andrea, and Granger. That doesn’t make Benedict any less of a character, but he’s led the series in a new and hopefully original direction.

Then again, nothing is original. Look out for that blog post. 😉

Anyway, we’ll go a little more into Benedict in the next chapter!

That’s all I’ve got for now. See you next week for another blog post!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I listening to?

Super by Pet Shop Boys

This is by no means a new album, but I recently happened upon the vinyl at a book store, much to my surprise. I first fell in love with their album Electric, and suddenly, I had to have everything they put out, one of the first albums I spontaneously found being Super. Now that I have the vinyl edition, I’ll probably play it to death while I edit DenCom 2.

If I had to name my number one favorite thing about the album, it would be the variety of songs. Yes, it’s all pop, but how the album manages to pull off songs like “The Pop Kids” in the same vein as “The Dictator Decides” and “Sad Robot World” is something I’ve done my best to study every time I put on the record.

Both Types of Prolific

I’m not qualified to give you advice.

But I’ve been asked.

Don’t get me wrong, I’m flattered that anyone would look at me and go, “That guy knows what he’s talking about!” And sometimes I do, but when it comes to writing, I can never, ever promise the aspiring author that I will tell them anything they don’t already know.

That being said, I’ve come across a question in my own jaunts into the craft that’s often left me stumped:

What defines prolific?

Does a novel a month mean you are a prolific author? Maybe two a year means you’re blowing past the traditionally-published competition. Maybe one every two or three or five or ten years is the best you can do.

All of the above are fine and have been argued to death by the writing community at large, but I tend to see things differently. It’s a blessing and a curse, I assure you.

When I think of myself, I tend to feel like I’m a prolific writer.

With one book.

Which means, in reality, I’m not a prolific author. But I’m still a prolific writer.

You catch that?

Well, if not, let me explain.

I work hard every time I sit down at the desk. Do I spend some days staring out the window watching the birds come and go from the feeder? Certainly. But something always gets done.

One of my many visitors.

In 2018, I finished between 5 and 6 drafts, depending on your definition of the word, but that’s a whole other can of worms. So how many books did I put out that year?

Zero.

Zilch.

Nada.

Part of why can be read about in my 2018 review post, but I can say I am honestly still proud of the work I’ve done. This past year, I was a prolific writer, but not a prolific author.

To spell it out, being a prolific writer means you write a lot, being a prolific author means you publish a lot. At least, that’s how I see it. I know that’s not how it works for everyone, but for the sake of my own sanity, this is how I choose to handle the craft.

Am I upset a book didn’t come out in 2018? Kind of, but it’s hard to get pissy with myself when I’m looking at a stack of books sauntering through the bottleneck DenCom 2 has currently clogged up. Publishing isn’t easy–or cheap if you want to do it right. Time and patience are a virtue in this profession, one I occasionally forget to embrace. And yet, I can stare at that stack of work and know that each of those binders holds a story someone will love someday.

Not today, but someday.

Even if I die tomorrow, odds are those manuscripts will find their way to Kindle or a publisher where they can be read and enjoyed.

And that is often enough to keep me focused on my work.

This was midway through the year. I managed to spend the second half of the year rewriting that bottom one (DenCom 2).

So, I guess this all goes back to the king daddy of writing advice, a universal truth nearly all authors agree on:

Write.

It’s all we can do, but in a profession that has a way of bringing you down anytime, anywhere, without warning, it’s always good to have something that never fails to make you smile.

But like I said, I’m not a prolific author, so I’m not qualified to say anything.

Right?

Anyway, that’s all for now! See you next week for Chapter 2 of Michael Ridding: A DenCom Thriller!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I reading?

Jerusalem by Alan Moore

It’s been a while since I’ve read a big, big, big book, and if I finish this behemoth, it will probably be the longest novel I’ve ever read. I’m told it clocks in at over 600,000 words (that’s roughly 10 Michael Riddings!) And that’s after edits and cuts were made. The thing was originally supposed to be 1 MILLION WORDS!

In short, Jerusalem is about the author’s hometown, Northampton (the one in England, just so no one gets confused). It tells a story that takes you through the city’s history in what the author calls a work of “Genetic Mythology”. Sometimes it’s too much detail, but so far, I’m loving it anyway. Whether I’ll finish this monster remains to be seen, but I’m interested enough in what’s happened so far to keep going, even if I can’t always understand it.

Michael Ridding Chapter 1 (with Insights!)

*Audible edition, read by Chris Abell, can be found here

“Humanity has risen beyond the confines of perceptible reality through the art of conspiracy and mystery. Properly executed, the search for something greater has always led to advancement, be the initial hypothesis proven true or false. If the urge to know more, to find something greater than ourselves, was not present, mankind would still be swimming around the ocean, accepting of the deep, endless blue as the only reality.

“But we didn’t. We went to the surface and found a new level of existence, as humanity always tries to do. It is a trait that has led to what should have been a simple, ignorant species, unaware of its own creation and creator, gaining collective will beyond basic instinct.

“If the search for more were to end, humanity would be stunted in its continuing growth, left to only ponder the greater meaning, to grow cold inside as belief in something greater than itself fades away, taking free will and consciousness with it.

“This, my friend, would mark the end of the world.”

-M.P.

Just Beyond the Surface, Waiting on the Beach.

1


Tuesday, July 23rd
Irvine Spectrum Shopping Mall
Irvine, California
3:47 PM


He sat alone in the waiting area of the open-air mall in one of the many wooden chairs. The blue fabric awning of Dave and Buster’s made the bright midday sun and hundred-degree temperatures tolerable.

In front of him was a small, simple black table. His untouched lemonade sat in the center, a growing pool of condensation ringed around the bottom. He held a large smartphone in a leather flip case, responding to messages from his store manager.

He was wearing a pair of Robert Wayne loafers, an older pair from a long dead line that he prided himself in having acquired. They were adorned with an abstract seal, the design reminiscent of an ancient islander’s artistic take on a crocodile. His button-up dress shirt slowly faded from red to black, finally matching his black dress pants.

Michael Ridding didn’t look like he wanted to be bothered.

At thirty-six, he stood six-foot-three with an intimidating face to most. However, those who knew him well only saw it as inviting. His thick brown hair was combed and slicked to his right side, several bleached patches barely visible as his natural color consumed them.

A ringing suddenly filled his left ear, and he reached up to correct the issue. He’d worn a hearing aid the majority of his life and always hated the things. In his youth, they were large, indiscreet units plagued by constant malfunctions. Nowadays, they were barely visible and only squealed on occasion, so he tolerated the minor annoyances.

Michael looked down at the clock on his phone. He’d been sitting for just over fifteen minutes, much longer than he had planned. Usually, he would have gone off shopping to his heart’s content, but it would have been rude to leave his friend and roommate at the restaurant without letting him know.

Aron Sanderson, who was still enjoying his time in the game room, was Michael’s lifelong friend and now roommate. They had been inseparable since they met in elementary school, back when their families lived in Sacramento. They had gone through school together, drudged their way through college in Ohio, then found themselves living not far apart when Michael moved to Palm Springs after managing an aquarium import facility in Dallas.

After Aron lost his home to a wildfire back in May, Michael had let him move in. How long their arrangement would last, Michael didn’t know, but they were content for the short term. Having someone to talk over the work day with was something neither of them knew they missed. In truth, Michael hoped Aron would live with him for as long as possible. Otherwise, it would just be him and the cat again, and however much comfort Granger was, she wasn’t exactly the best listener.

He set the phone down. Sipping his lemonade, he watched the shoppers come and go, most of them groups of young people migrating from one fashion store to another like schools of fish on a reef.

The minutes continued to tick by with no sign of Aron. Michael didn’t worry; odds were, Aron had gotten carried away.

Again.

Normally reserved, when given the chance he would branch out and have some fun. Michael had left him at the skee ball lanes, where he was challenging some kid to see who could get the highest score. It was good-natured fun, but Michael was looking forward to the day when Aron realized how immature he looked. Compared to his best friend, Aron had always been a little less uptight, but the last few years had seen Aron break out of his shell more often. Michael supposed it had something to do with the job.

Michael couldn’t help but reflect on his work. The excursion to the Spectrum was meant to be a cool-down after a long, tedious meeting with their boss while he had been in town. Instead, Michael could feel the sun creeping over the protection of the awning as it lowered, threatening to take his remaining patience with it across the hazy blue sky.

He drew his thoughts inward, letting go of his concerns about Aron. He found himself looking back to the time when his life had taken a dramatic turn. A turn that led him to this moment.

He let the memory consume him, oblivious to the three men getting ready to kill him just out of sight.

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INSIGHTS!

This chapter probably went through the most changes of any first chapter I’ve written. I wanted to make sure I opened with a clear picture of Michael, but I ended up cutting a lot of backstory before beta readers and the editor got a hold of it. Among the discarded tidbits were Michael’s rings, which ended up being cut from the book entirely. In earlier drafts, he wore a ring on each finger that signified something only he knew, and we would have found out in later books what they meant to him–perhaps one per book. This is still an idea I love that will probably be recycled into another story or novel someday.

Next was his interest in shoes, which is still hinted at throughout the book, but not to the extent of the first few drafts. If I remember right, we decided to cut this in the line edit phase. Michael originally made a hobby out of collecting expensive shoes, but I decided to cut this since he already had a hobby–aquariums–and because it was a little to close to several of the people who inspired Michael. A recurring theme I discovered in these people was a love of fashion, particularly shoes, but I cut this from the final draft since the aquariums were interesting enough. His love of fashion and such is still implied and expanded on throughout the series moving forward, but I don’t intend to bring it too close to the surface unless the need arises.

Quite a bit was cut out involving Aron, as well. What made it into the final book is about half of what was there to begin with. I originally went into Aron’s backstory in greater detail, the most notable change being a rough date for when he would move out. This was recycled into Book 2, where it’s one of the many issues leading to a rift between Michael and Aron. (NOTE: This could still be cut… again.)

That’s all the insight I have for this chapter. I’m sure I’ll think of more later and may update the post accordingly.

But, for now, thanks for reading!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I listening to?

“The Viles” by Blaqk Audio.

I know, Davey and Jade two weeks in a row. What can I say? Their side project, Blaqk Audio’s new single just came out (at the time of this writing), and they also have a new album, Only Things We Love, coming out in April. Plus, I listened to their albums Cexcells and Bright Black Heaven nearly the whole time I was writing Michael Ridding, not to mention AFI’s Crash Love and Pet Shop Boys’ Electric.

I’m rambling…

Anyway, “The Viles” is great, and I’ve linked to it above because it’s worth a listen, and because I can’t help but give them exposure they probably don’t need.

Anyway, have a listen, and I’ll see you guys next week!

Rebirth: Michael Ridding Serialization and Blog Posts!

Let’s try something new.

Let’s try something new.

Take note, I said “try”.

For the last few months, I’ve been backlogging a lot of essays and pieces of writing I’ve been looking to find a home for. But like so many searches, the destination was right in front of me.

Starting next Thursday, I’ll be posting weekly on the sthoover.com blog. I’ll do my best to keep this consistent, but in the future, we may downgrade to a post every other week, a post every month, or a post whenever I feel like it. So what can you expect?

  • Essays on just about anything
  • Posts about writing
  • Michael Ridding serialization (with insights!)
  • Original fiction (unpublished)
  • Interviews (maybe?)

So far, I’ve banked a couple months’ worth of posts, and I have to say I feel like this is the outlet I needed. After a relatively sparse 2018 as far as published writing is concerned, I’m looking forward to a few months of weekly posts, and I hope you are too.

Before I go, I want to know what you guys want to see. Does what’s up there sound good? Is there anything you know you want to see that I haven’t listed? Do you think you’re interview material? Hit me up in the comments or on Facebook and Twitter if you have any suggestions!

Lastly, as sort of a running thing, I plan to end most posts with a recommendation or short review. These can be books, movies, music, and more. So let’s wrap things up with the first one!


What am I listening to?:

The Missing Man by AFI

The EP came out not long ago, and I’m loving it. The vinyl showed up about a week ago, and it’s been on near repeat ever since. AFI hasn’t done much, if anything, I don’t like. My favorite song’s probably “Back into the Sun”, with “Break Angels” as a close second. I get big DenCom vibes from both songs, which will always make them favorites. Overall, an easy 8 out of 10 for me.


I guess that’s it for now. See you next Thursday with the first serialized chapter of Michael Ridding!


-S.T. Hoover

P.S.: I know I already said this above, but I want to reiterate that I am not holding myself to this schedule in any way, or to the blog itself. Big things are coming up this year, and if that means the blog takes a back seat, then it does. Just wanted to make sure I cleared that up. Thanks for reading!

Some Minor Updates

Paperbacks of Michael Ridding: A DenCom Thriller are going up for sale on Amazon within the next two weeks. I’ll have a limited number of signed copies available as well, so keep an eye out for that post.

I’ve had a lot of people ask me how they can help make sure Michael Ridding gets the sequel it deserves. One of the best ways, if not the only way, is to spread the word about the book. Leaving reviews on Amazon and Goodreads helps more than you would think. Post about it on social media or recommend it to a friend looking for a good thriller. I try to do my part without spamming, but no matter what, I’ll always look biased since I’m the one who wrote the book. Readers saying good things will do more for Michael–or any future book–than I ever could.
Lastly, I’ve had people ask me a lot about what’s next. Well at this time, I’ve secured an editor for my next standalone project. I’m hoping for a release somewhere around Christmas, but there’s a lot more to consider before I put a date on it. Once everything gets straightened out and I have a cover, I’ll give you guys the details.
I guess that’s it. The link to the Kindle version is in the comments if anybody is interested in picking that up. Otherwise, you should see the paperback out very soon.
Thanks for reading, and I hope you’re all enjoying the book.
-S.T. Hoover

Michael Ridding: A DenCom Thriller is out NOW!

In Southern California, three terrorists of unknown allegiances slaughter dozens of men at a shopping mall.

In Denver, the eccentric CEO of Denver Communications, or DenCom, has a target on his head.

In the wilds of Greenland, a long forgotten enemy is reaching out for recognition and revenge.

At the center of it all, a special investigator for the “communications” company is dragged into a diabolical plot he can’t begin to understand.

Continue reading “Michael Ridding: A DenCom Thriller is out NOW!”

Author Fair Recap/Going Dark

Hello, everyone, and welcome once again to the S.T. Hoover Power Hour!
Ok, it’s only a blog post.
I’m sorry I lied.
But anyway, I wanted to write up a fairly “serious” post about the recent author fair I attended, and also talk about where things stand with Michael Ridding.
As some of you know, I recently attended the Stark County District Library’s Local Authors Fair, which was the first event I ever attended as an author. Most of you know the story of how it happened, but for a quick recap, Faryl was set up to attend the fair, and when she brought me up during the process, they asked if I would come along. I didn’t intend to do any events until the book was actually published, but after talking with those in charge of organizing the event, I felt confident in going to promote my upcoming novel and meet other local authors.
To be honest, I didn’t know what to expect. My mind tends to think the worst will always happen–and what that would have been, I don’t know. Luckily, I didn’t find out.
While it was a small event, it was something I now see I needed to do.
I brought along a hardback “prototype” of the book along with some information about it, and I teased my next book as well. People really seemed to respond to the new cover and book details in a positive light. I had some good, long conversations with potential readers and other local authors, and it was overall a very positive and rewarding experience. I had no idea so many talented authors lived in the area (nearly 40 authors signed up for the event), and I hope their introduction to me was a good one. I’ve always known I don’t quite fit the usual “author” mold, but nonetheless, I wasn’t looked down upon for that. People seemed to accept me, authors and attendees alike, which I will admit was one of my greater fears. I was worried that I wouldn’t be looked at as an equal, possibly for who I am, or because I didn’t have a book out yet. Luckily, neither were the case. I felt overwhelmingly accepted and understood at the event, and I can’t wait to go back again.
While I don’t typically give advice, since I feel as such a new author that would be inappropriate, I do feel safe in saying this: If you have an opportunity like I did, where you know the book will be out or already is out, no matter the size or scope of the event, do it so long as it’s reputable. Not all of them are, so do your research. But even this little library event, for how small it was, made all the difference, and I felt it every time I talked with an author or reader. Even if no one attended the event, I think the authors would have been more than fine mingling and talking amongst themselves, and for the first time in my life, I felt like one of them. I felt professional–more professional than all the posting and tweeting in the world will ever make me feel. So if you’re asked or you want to attend, and you have the book(s) (or some form or writing) to back yourself up, definitely look into events like the one I attended. It’ll be worth it if you know what you’re doing.
Now, onto another topic, Michael Ridding updates.
As it says in the title, I plan on going dark when Michael comes in. This means no Facebook, website or Tumblr until my edits are complete. Twitter may still see some action since it’s a quick and easy platform to work with. But everything else will probably be pushed aside so I can finish the book.
My plan is that over April, I run through the line edits and begin the copyediting process. I have a copyeditor on standby who is eagerly awaiting the manuscript, and as I finish it, she will get to work and make sure it all looks spiffy.
The novel is almost done. I feel confident in saying it will be out this summer, and if I can, I will get it out as early as May (cross all those fingers and toes).
Other than that, things are moving along. I have two other novels I’m currently saving money to have edited, but for now, my focus is on Michael. This book’s waited a long time to see readers, but I don’t want to rush the process. Still, I’ll have enough to keep myself busy after it’s wrapped up, and hopefully, we will see a second novel release in 2017 (cross all those finger and toes again, just don’t hurt yourself. K? K.)
I suppose that’s all for now. As of this update, I plan to go dark and finish the book. The edits could come in tonight, a week from now, or longer. Regardless, I need a rest before I review them, which I plan to start taking after this posts, and continue until the edits arrive. We’ll let fate decide how long that will be.
Thanks for reading my ramblings and I hope to see you all again in a little over a month with some cool news.
Thanks again for reading, I’ll see you in time.

-S.T. Hoover

 

P.S. Incase you missed it, you can find the new cover on the “Books” page or on the “Michael Ridding” page.