Michael Ridding Chapter 4 (with Insights!)

*Audible edition, read by Chris Abell, can be found here

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“What I’m about to say is ludicrously stupid,” Benedict began, “but I ask that you keep an open mind. If you have any questions, I can answer them after.”

Michael nodded for Benedict to continue.

The flood of information the man let loose was overwhelming, but Michael kept quiet until the end.

“About a year ago, I came into possession of an extensive communications and networking corporation. Known as DenCom to most of the public, its advanced technologies division currently supplies the United States with the majority of its newest tech. Flight systems, satellites, even a few aircraft are in the works.

“I got to know the old CEO about a year before taking over the company. He’d heard about me through… okay, I know how stupid this is gonna sound, but he heard about me through my… ‘exploits’ in cryptozoology. I was job-hunting in Florida when he asked me to visit Denver, my old hometown. I accepted his offer, and he paid for a first-class ticket.

“I was taken straight from the airport to a house close by the Rockies. There, I was led to the bed of an old man who told me his name was Herbert Morecraft. He’d heard about the hobbies I had in my youth—ghost-hunting, UFOs, all that kind of stuff. Nothing ever came of it, though, until I was out of high school and I camped out in the Sierra Nevadas to look for Sasquatch. As I’m sure you’ve already assumed, I was young and stupid, so I got lost pretty quickly.

“As far as I was concerned, the trip was a complete failure. I was lost out there for three months with nothing but my coat and survival guide. I panicked, went feral, turned into a mountain man eating berries and catching trout out of streams to survive. Eventually, some hikers found me and took me back to town.

“After I got out of the hospital, I decided I’d had enough excitement for one lifetime. I spent four years in Seattle getting a useless degree in business management, then spent another year looking for work, living out of my car and cheap hotels so I could stay mobile. Near the end of that year was when Morecraft interviewed me.

“He told me two things. One, his doctors told him he was dying and he had less than a year to live, and two, that he’d researched me and was hoping I could take over as the new CEO once he passed away. I was floored. He laughed, then offered me a deal.

“He offered to fund a full expedition for the Sasquatch with me as the team leader. We could spend the next six months going wherever we wanted and doing whatever we wanted, but if we could prove the creature’s existence, then I would have fulfilled my end of the bargain, and he would sign over DenCom to me. He also said that if I did become CEO, he wanted me to pick up where he left off on his own investigations after he was gone. What could I say to that? He was offering me a chance to pursue my—albeit strange—passion. Plus, he offered me a hefty paycheck whether I came back with proof or not, just for my time. So, I accepted his offer, and here I am.”

Michael took the story in. It was obviously rehearsed, but much of it sounded sincere. But what was the point?

He’d never been a believer in the paranormal, apart from the existence of ghosts. In his youth he saw things, most of them probably figments of his imagination. Nonetheless, the experiences had opened the door to research in the phenomena, and he came out a believer. But everything else that fell under the catch-all term of “paranormal” didn’t particularly interest him. Still, his curiosity was piqued.

“So you found one?” Michael asked cautiously.

“Well, I’m CEO, so I must have found something,” Benedict answered with a hint of sarcasm.

“All right, then what did you find? A live one? Footprints? Hair?”

“If I could tell you, I would, but one of the things Morecraft and I agreed on was that none of the discoveries I made using his resources could become public. I mean, couldn’t you just see hillbilly gangs heading up into the woods and killing every last one if they knew where to look?”

Michael opened his mouth to answer, but before he could, Benedict continued.

“Before he died, Morecraft said he wanted me to bring in more people to help me in my work. He didn’t name anyone in particular, but in my…” Benedict trailed off, gathering his thoughts. Several tense moments passed before he continued, “In my research, you and your friend Aron both showed up as potential candidates. Don’t ask why because honestly, I don’t quite know myself. I’m simply trusting the judgment of those who advise me.”

Michael raised an eyebrow.

“I want to offer you a deal, Michael. If you agree to help me with my research and expeditions, I will see to it that your store stays open. Not only that, but you will be paid generously to investigate and research a variety of subjects, from paranormal to political to religious. It’s all totally legal and sanctioned by the US government, as long as we do the occasional side work for them, in addition to giving them any valuable finds from our own investigations. I’m not allowed to answer the ‘why’ questions about your projects—or even say if your work is a success in some cases—but I can say you will make a good living and find fulfillment with the work you do. If at any time, that isn’t true, just let me know, and we will fix that. The arrangement would benefit everyone. I really, really think we can make this work.”

As Benedict caught his breath, Michael let the first of several questions out of his head. “You want me to take a second job working for you, and in exchange, you’ll pay me and support my shop?”

“Yep.” Benedict looked relieved, as if an enormous weight had been lifted from his shoulders.

“And I’ll have no idea what I’m working on until you tell me?”

“In some cases, yes. Think of it like you’re working alone on one corner of a puzzle. You may not know what it is—and I may not either—but when everyone puts their corners together, we get a picture. If you don’t feel like it’s a good fit…” he trailed off, his breathing still heavy. “If it’s not a good fit, then we can work something out. Plus, like I said, if your own interests are desirable and could provide useful results, I would be more than happy to let you pursue them with our help.”

Michael thought he would have more to ask, but as Benedict caught his breath, only one more question escaped his lips: “How do I know this isn’t a scam?”

Benedict reached into his coat pocket and produced a large packet that Michael was surprised could have been concealed without being noticed. He placed it on the table, taking one long look at it before sliding it across to Michael.

“Everything you’ll need to convince yourself is in there. I think it would be best if you took a day or two to look it over before making your choice. There’s a card with my personal phone number on it, so when the time comes to say yes or no, call me. Everything else should be self-explanatory.” Benedict got up and pushed his chair in. “I may not be reachable for the next twelve hours or so. Where I’m heading, I don’t get great reception. By tomorrow morning, though, I should be able to take calls.”

Benedict extended a hand to Michael, who hesitated for a moment before shaking. Part of him hoped that whatever was inside the packet was bogus and that the whole thing turned out to be a scam. He knew there could be dark things down that path, things he didn’t want to get involved in. And as he looked into Benedict’s eyes for the last time that day, he thought he could see what that kind of research could do to someone.

They ended the handshake, and Benedict headed for the door. “Think it over and give me a call. And for the moment, don’t tell anyone, not even Aron until I can talk to him personally.” He gave a small wave. “I’ll see you in time.”

Benedict left the break room, and shortly after, Michael heard the front door chime, signaling his departure.

Benedict had put on a good show, but he still could have been a brilliant con artist. It could all be a game, an elaborate plot meant to take everything Michael had left, which was already dwindling dangerously close to nothing by the day.

Money was so tight, he was considering talking to his parents again and seeing if he could move back home to Sacramento for a while. It was a prospect he loathed, mostly since it had been over a year since he had spoken with them. They hadn’t approved of his choice to leave Dallas, and the few times they had talked since the move had been tense, to say the least. When it came to his father, who never failed to bring it up, “hostile” would have been a better word. He knew he was a disappointment to them, forgoing relationships and stability in favor of his own desires.

Now, he might have an opportunity to do things right in their eyes, but he couldn’t say he wanted to.

He left the packet on the table and headed for the computer. First, he looked up DenCom and found it was an actual corporation. Not only that, but it was indeed the leader in non-commercial tech for businesses and the US government. He also found out that since the company’s founding in the sixties, no one had ever gotten an interview with either CEO, but he found purported pictures of them on conspiracy sites. Apparently, Morecraft and Benedict’s work had not gone unnoticed by those in tinfoil hats.

He found an article on one site detailing Morecraft’s disappearance and Benedict’s arrival onto the scene. The article included pictures of who they thought were the two CEOs. The older man in the first picture wore thick glasses and a slightly disheveled tan tweed sports jacket. Michael could tell the picture was likely taken without Morecraft’s knowledge, since he wasn’t looking at the camera and a blurry cityscape could be seen behind him. The other picture was obviously of Benedict, who also seemed oblivious to the photographer. His coat was blowing in the wind, and he looked to be on an airport tarmac with two other, much taller men: One was bald, the other sported a short Mohawk.

The article itself was essentially useless. It was a lot of “We know something is going on. We don’t know what, but something!”

He closed the computer, only slightly less cautious about the situation. Benedict was the subject of some crackpot’s mystery article. So what? Couldn’t that crackpot be Benedict himself, just another layer of the man’s scheme? He obviously knew Michael was going to look him up, so could he have written the article?

At least DenCom existed. That was verifiable. In fact, as he thought back to his last trip to Denver for a trade show, he had seen DenCom Tower in person. It was the largest building in the city, standing easily a third taller than the rest.

On top of that, it seemed well-established that the CEO had never been a public figure, and that he was only known by his first name, even within the company. Still, the article implied that the name might have been taken from the recently renamed street that led to DenCom Tower: Benedict Street.

He’d seen enough. He had to open the packet.

Michael headed back to the break room, the packet still lying on the table. He opened it, flipped it over, and let three items fall out. The first was a plain white business card with Benedict’s number written on it. The second was an employee manual that was easily an inch thick, labeled Practice and Procedure for DenCom Private Agents. Michael flipped through it, paying little attention to the text.

The third item was a small envelope labeled “Advance” in rushed handwriting. He gently opened it and nearly fell out of his chair.

Inside was a check made out to him for a million dollars.

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INSIGHTS!

Benedict’s backstory went through quite a few changes, but I never messed with the meat of the story. At one time, I drafted this as a narrative from Benedict’s point of view when he first took over DenCom. This was cut because I do plan to go back and tell this story in a future novel and also because a flashback on top of a flashback is not an ideal way to start a book (*cough*).

So we just had Benedict tell the story, and I think it works a little better and doesn’t raise the kind of questions the narrative likely would have.

That’s it for now. See you next week with another blog post!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I reading?

One Hundred Lyrics and a Poem by Neil Tennant

This is the first time in years that I think I’ve bought two copies of the same book. I actually bought one of the limited edition hardbacks that was signed, numbered, and in its own special case (this also marks the only time I can recall paying over $100 for a book for pleasure–it was a wedding present to myself).

I eventually got the standard edition as well because I’m so worried something will happen to the expensive one if I read it or carry it around with me.

In short, Neil takes 100 of his favorite lyrics from The Pet Shop Boys (he and Chris Lowe are the sole members of the band) and gives insight on each of the songs and their meaning or what inspired them. It’s been a fun read so far, and I hope to see more of Neil’s writing in the future.

On Bigfoot and Hominids

It’s been nearly two years since the publication of my first novel. And since then, one thing I’ve often been asked pertains to one or two pages in Chapter 4.

DenCom’s CEO, Benedict, brings up his past expeditions in search of Sasquatch, and often, reader response is similar to this:

“Bigfoot? Why the hell are we talking about Bigfoot? This is a thriller novel, right? I want something believable! Give me shoe phones and exploding pens!”

…Ok, maybe it’s put a little nicer than that.

Usually, it’s a casual enough question. I’m talking to people about the novel or I’ve just read at an event, and I get asked if I believe in cryptids, namely Bigfoot.

Now, let me preface the rest of this essay by saying I’ve never gone out in the woods and looked for Bigfoot, nor do I recall meeting anyone who has. I will admit, my beliefs on the subject of cryptids and most “paranormal” or “supernatural” things typically align with the works of John Keel, but for the sake of time, I’ll try and make things a little simpler in this post.

For those who don’t know, the word “cryptid” is used to describe an animal that has not been proven to exist by science. Several cryptids have been found, but not anything of note in recent years. Looking back into the last century or two, we may find such “cryptids” as the giant squid or several species of gorilla, the latter of which was often described as a wild man by natives to less-than-open-minded explorers.

Sound familiar?

Join the club, bro.

In the last few years, I’ve stopped trying to make a case for Bigfoot, Sasquatch, the Yeti, Yowe or any humanoid ape roaming around undiscovered, the lone exception being Orang Pendeck. I won’t go into too much detail here, but the evidence in favor of Sumatra’s little hairy man is stacking up. The cryptid may be an undiscovered relative, if not an undiscovered species, of orangutans. The last distinct species of orangutan described, P. tapanuliensis, was documented as recently as 2017, and while I wouldn’t call it a found “cryptid”, it’s evidence enough that there are plenty of animals left out there to be discovered, even among the great apes.

So that being said, what are my thoughts on cryptid hominids, particularly Bigfoot?

Well, if it’s still out there after nearly fifty years of “modern” searching and centuries of reports, then we’re obviously doing something wrong.

Alternatively, if someone’s been running around in an ape suit looking for attention since 986 AD*, then why aren’t they selling the secret of eternal life instead? I’m sure that would get them plenty of attention!

But if there is an undiscovered species of great ape roaming around North America, the Himalayas, inland Australia, and Sumatra, then why haven’t we found any hard evidence, like a body?

Well, let’s assume we have looked everywhere–which we haven’t–and there are still pieces of scientific evidence that say “yep, something’s out there”. What does that mean? Why do we have this proof after every stone’s been turned? Are they all elaborate fakes? Can these scientists not tell the difference between a plaster impression and a real, honest to God footprint? 

But if we’ve looked everywhere and are still left with evidence that says “yes, the creature exists”, then what does that mean?

Probably nothing.

Let’s be honest, I could tell you what it means, but who gives a damn?

Really, what would the difference be? To most people, it’d be like smelling a fart in an empty elevator. It takes more than one person to play the “whodunit” game, so what if it’s just you in there? And you know for a fact that you didn’t slice that particular wheel of Limburger. What does it mean?

It means you’re worried about a fart.

…That’s a bit harsh.

So you all must think I don’t believe in any of this crap, right?

Wrong! 

I believe something is out there, but I’m going in knowing there is a legitimate chance I’m wrong. Does that mean I’m willing to go out in the woods and look for Bigfoot? Well, no one’s asked me yet, but if someone did and I could make the trip, I would be happy to tag along, if for no other reason than to say I did it.

Something is out there. A legend–that much is certain. A creature, perhaps. It’s happened before: Legends and rumors prove all too factual, often revealed with a bang… or a whimper.

Or nothing.

That’s all for now. See you next week with another chapter of Michael Ridding!


-S.T. Hoover

What am I watching?:

I’ve decided to link to a video on John A. Keel’s uniting theory of the paranormal. It’s no substitute for his work, but for those who want to dig a little deeper, it’s a good starting point.


*986 AD is supposedly the year Leif Erickson saw a Sasquatch, but this is up for debate. According to historians, Leif Erickson wasn’t even born yet! Only mentioned because it’s referenced to death in Bigfoot lore.


Bigfoot/Sasquatch image created by “Happybluemo” and is used under Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 4.0 International license.

Michael Ridding Chapter 3 (with Insights!)

*Audible edition, read by Chris Abell, can be found here

3


Michael gazed down at his screen. The smaller man steadied himself on the aquarium shelves with his right hand. As he watched, the man’s face slowly returned to its normal color. It had been five minutes since the man had spoken out loud, and Michael was certain he was about to make his move. Whatever that was.

Michael had no weapon. Not because he had anything against them, but because he simply didn’t think he needed one. However, he suddenly wished he had a gun within reach as he saw the man approach the counter.

As he rounded the corner, Michael saw that he wore that same forced smile.

“Mr. Ridding,” the man began as he came up to the desk and extended a hand. “My name is Benedict, and if you don’t mind, I would like to take a moment of your time to talk about a business proposal.”

How did this strange man know his name? Was he some old contact, maybe a sales representative from one of the various companies he stocked? Maybe they had met at a trade show? It was possible, but then again, this was someone Michael knew he would have remembered.

Even so, he sounded as awkward as a young kid reading in front of a class. The presentation was obviously rehearsed, but there was genuine passion in the forced words. Whatever this guy wanted to talk over, he was serious, but also unsure of how to handle the situation. Michael considered the request. If it was a legitimate proposal, he was willing to hear it, but why present him with this now when the store was about to close?

Finally given a better chance to look the man over, Michael reconsidered his earlier assessment. It was obvious that Benedict wasn’t a drug addict or some other undesirable.

To start with, he smelled good. He wore a copious amount of Oxford Bleu cologne, the distinct scent crossing the distance between them with ease. His well-tailored coat was nicely set and freshly cleaned—not a hair clung to it.

It was like Michael was talking to a completely different man than the one who had walked in.

Michael grasped the outstretched hand while glancing at his wristwatch. It was just after twelve-thirty. “Well, I was about to close for lunch, so I guess we can talk in the break room, if you like.”

Benedict made little attempt to contain his joy.

Michael flipped the “Closed” sign, not bothering to lock the door, and showed Benedict to the small employee lunch area. The room consisted of a microwave atop a mini-fridge and a round folding table with two matching chairs. Michael let Benedict have a seat first, then walked to the refrigerator.

“You want anything? We have burritos, soup?”

“No thanks, I ate on the plane,” Benedict said, then quickly grew quiet, as if he’d been silently reprimanded.

“Well, I hope you don’t mind if I have something. It’ll be my first meal all day.” Or perhaps his only meal, but he didn’t tell Benedict that. If this man was here to discuss business, it wasn’t in his best interest to imply that he barely had enough money for one microwaved meal a day. “So, you just flew in?”

“Yeah, my plane came in just a couple hours ago. I had a layover and thought I would stop in town,” Benedict said as Michael put his food in the microwave.

“Well, feel free to let me know if I’m keeping you,” Michael said.

“Oh, they won’t leave without me,” Benedict said uncomfortably, as if he wasn’t sure if he should be saying anything at all.

“Wish airlines would do that for me,” Michael remarked. He hadn’t flown in a long time. Even then, it had been for business, and he found none of the sparse trips to trade shows enjoyable.

“Well, they have to, since it’s my plane,” Benedict said with a hint of resistance.

Michael looked back, his eyes bulging. “You have your own plane?”

“Well, I wouldn’t call it mine. It’s the company’s private jet, but I have priority,” Benedict replied.

Michael fought to keep his jaw from dropping. Benedict’s claim of having a private jet left him surprised, yet troubled. It seemed impossible that any company with the resources to maintain such an asset would be interested in his small shop.

The microwave went off and Michael retrieved his meal.

“All right,” he said, cautiously walking to the table and sitting across from Benedict. “You have my attention.”

Want to read Chapter 4 but can’t wait?
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INSIGHTS!

Chapters 3 and 4 were originally combined, but during the early stages of the editing process, I ended up breaking them apart like I did many chapters of the novel. At one point, Michael Ridding only consisted of 20 or 25 chapters that were broken up for the sake of keeping a fast pace, which I still think works and made the initial writing process of DenCom 2 more enjoyable.

At one point, if I recall correctly, there was a scene where we see the killers (referenced in the first chapter) interact and adjust their plan, as well as hint at how it will eventually go wrong (I swear that’s not a spoiler. If their plan succeeded, we wouldn’t have nearly 57 more chapters of fun!). This was cut because the editor and I thought it would be a better idea to keep what was happening purely in Michael’s head for the duration of the flashback so it doesn’t confuse readers.

Anyway, that’s what I’ve got for now! See you next week with another blog post!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I listening to?

i by The Magnetic Fields

At the time of this writing, I’m listening to this album several times a week as I write my first Kaiju novel. Odds are, I’ll probably have moved on to DenCom 2 edits by the time this gets posted, so I can’t promise that I’m listening to it right now at this very moment. But I have a feeling it will filter into my DenCom 2 playlist, especially for the… well, let’s just say confusing moments that may or may not be written out.

Yeah… just… take anything I say about DenCom 2 right now with a grain of salt, K?

Anyway, I wanted to give them a shot but wasn’t ready to dive into 69 Love Songs or 50-Song Memoir, and this was the only other CD they had at the local record store at the time. I don’t know if this is regarded as one of their better albums or not, but I have to say I’m impressed. Stephin Merritt has a rather distinct voice that carries the often emotional lyrics with absolute precision. It’s well worth the listen if you have the chance.

Writing is Like a Magic 8 Ball

A couple months ago, my wife and I went to an 80’s/90’s-themed party for her work. After the party, everyone was allowed to take one of the little toys or trinkets from their table.

Among other things, we grabbed a magic 8 ball that now sits on my desk.

I’ve found it more than a little fun to play with for the last few weeks. As I’ve sauntered through line edits and redrafting short stories, I’ve asked it several times for advice.

“Magic 8 Ball, should I kill this character’s puppy?”

Signs point to Yes.

“Aw, but it’s a cute puppy. Are you sure?”

It is certain.

“Oh… ok.”

I can’t tell you why the Magic 8 Ball had a vendetta against the little boy’s puppy, but it did. In much the same way, I’m sure there is no shortage of writers out there who are facing the same problem. They don’t often know what to do, so they turn to the muse for help, hoping it’s up and running. Most of the time, it’s like a stubborn bear that will lash out when poked or prodded.

Or, worse, it’s like that shiny Yveltal I got a code for that won’t listen to me because I don’t have enough gym badges (If you got that reference, you’re cool, bro).

Anyway, you know what I mean, right?

It is decidedly so.

Good.

Sometimes the muse is an odd, inept little voice that tells you to kill the main character in Chapter 1 so the book can be over sooner. But more often than not, it’s a voice with some reason behind it. Recently, I was writing a novel, and my outline called for one of the main characters to win the fight.

He didn’t.

He died.

Painfully.

At the time, I was a wreck. I didn’t know why I’d let that happen. There were still five or six more chapters left in the book. I couldn’t let him die!

But this was a rare occasion where I listened to the muse, bypassed my thorough outline, and kept going. And not only do I feel like the decision worked, but it actually solved a few plotholes I’d caught earlier in the novel.

So, should you listen to the muse? Is it always a good idea?

Ask again later.

“Oh…”

“Should I listen to the muse?”

Concentrate and ask again.

“SHOULD I LISTEN TO THE MUSE! TELL ME, DAMN YOU!”

Reply hazy. Try again.

“YOU’RE A STUPID PIECE OF CRAP!”

My sources say no.

“Ok, I’m done arguing with a toy!”

Don’t count on it.

Anyway, that’s all I’ve got for now! See you next week with Michael Ridding, Chapter 3!

-S.T. Hoover

What am I reading?

Guilty by Association by Albert Simon

This is the sixth Henry Wright mystery and while the grammatical side occasionally leaves a lot to be desired, I’m quite enjoying this book.

I’d actually read up to Book 5, Coachella Valley Traffic Jam, thinking that was the end of the series. I’d read on the author’s Kindle page that he was working on a sixth book, but at that time it’d been many, many years since Book 5.

But much to my surprise, when adding Book 5 to my Goodreads “Read” list, I noticed the 6th book had a page. I clicked on it for giggles and was plesantly suprised to see a reviews and a buy link! So, apperently, the series isnt over!

Anyway, just a brief summary: Henry Wright is a retired police chief who lives in Palm Springs, California. He is often called in by his friend in the local police department to help him solve the tougher cases. Recently, (minor spoiler) he’s gotten engaged, and his wife helps him solve some cases.

This is definitely not what I usually read, but I came across the first book (which is FREE on Kindle) while I was writing Michael Ridding. I wanted to get my head in the Palm Springs mindset, and the series did not disapoint.

Anyway, I’ll link to the first book below (try to remember it’s a first novel, but in my opinion, storywise, it’s a pretty good one!) I know, I should probably post a link to the book I’m reading, but if you want to get into any series, you should probably start with Book 1.

You can take a look and possibly download it below (again, it’s FREE on Kindle!).

Wow, that’s the longest “What am I blah blah blah” thing I’ve written so far! I guess I love this series more than I thought!